I'm not a fan of this line of thinking, but i know how to hum a few bars ----------------------------------------------
Frank said: "
I don't see that any of those had to do with unconscious racism or implicit bias"
Ignoring the content of the reading entirely (because that's a different discussion): Were you graded for grammar, syntax, good writing, and the like?
If so, was the syntax and grammar used in your household and your general community considered acceptable?
Would those who grew up in different households and communities be thereby disadvantaged? Communities where ending sentences in prepositions was normal? Or dropping the verb "to be"?
Would your 500 word essay have been acceptable if you were talking about how "Children in rye fields need catched. Holden wants do that. Hard."?
Why is that acceptable when spoken within the community that student comes from, but not acceptable when written in college? I'll tell you why! It is because college is a tool of cultural imperialism. Those English classes are one of many ways we systematically make things harder for those who are already disadvantaged and marginalized in society, while giving a leg up to those already advantaged and centered in society. We shouldn't put up with that crap any longer. We should equally value the contributions from those other perfectly valid cultures. If the student summarized the book, they summarized the book.
You need to understand: A college degrees is, first and foremost, a symbolic accomplishment essential to get ahead in current society. By making degree-attainment require that people conform to the cultural trappings of the already dominant group, you are institutionalizing the preexisting power structure and further mentally brutalizing the already-oppressed. You are telling them that who they are and where they come from isn't good enough. It is no different than imperial Britain looking down upon those who couldn't speak "The King's English", and effectively barring them from having successful lives in the colonies where their ancestors had lived for generations. Stop doing it. Examine every thought you have about how to teach. Be better.
--------------------------------------------- that's how the argument goes anyway.