FRIAMer! I need your help.

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Here is my story.

I  have prepared paper for the European Conference on ALife. The paper
was  accepted  but  … as you can see below referees were not exited by
quality of my English.

"There are many grammatical errors, the paper should be proofread by a
native speaker of English."
"This paper has some serious problems with written English."
"The  English  is  grammatically  weak.  It  should  be  reviewed  and
corrected by a native speaker."

Unfortunately  it  is  not  so  easy for me to find "native speaker of
English"  who  could check my paper here in Moscow. So I have to ask -
"Can   you  help  me  out  with  my  English  homework?"  (cited  from
dictionary :).

If somebody will decide to help, the paper could be found here -
http://www.keldysh.ru/pages/mrbur-web/bur.zip  (516 KB)

Before hand thanks for any help,
m.

[Friam mailing list]

Hello Mikhail,

When is your deadline for submission? If you can wait two weeks, I can make
a pass over it.

-Steve

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: [hidden email] [mailto:[hidden email]]On
> Behalf Of Mikhail Burtsev
> Sent: Thursday, May 22, 2003 4:51 PM
> To: [hidden email]
> Subject: [FRIAM] FRIAMer! I need your help.
>
>
> ***  May 23 meeting to be at Jane's Cafe  ***
> ***  map at http://www.redfish.com/friam  ***
>
>
>
> Here is my story.
>
> I  have prepared paper for the European Conference on ALife. The paper
> was  accepted  but  - as you can see below referees were not exited by
> quality of my English.
>
> "There are many grammatical errors, the paper should be proofread by a
> native speaker of English."
> "This paper has some serious problems with written English."
> "The  English  is  grammatically  weak.  It  should  be  reviewed  and
> corrected by a native speaker."
>
> Unfortunately  it  is  not  so  easy for me to find "native speaker of
> English"  who  could check my paper here in Moscow. So I have to ask -
> "Can   you  help  me  out  with  my  English  homework?"  (cited  from
> dictionary :).
>
> If somebody will decide to help, the paper could be found here -
> http://www.keldysh.ru/pages/mrbur-web/bur.zip  (516 KB)
>
> Before hand thanks for any help,
> m.
>
>
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Hello Steve,

First  of all I would like to thank very much all the people responded
to my call for help. I don't know what can I do for you, but if
somebody should prepare paper in Russian - rely on me :)

Unfortunately I haven't two weeks. All papers has to be in Dortmund by
June 8th, 2003. So I plan to send papers about June 1th.

SG> When is your deadline for submission? If you can wait two weeks, I can make
SG> a pass over it.

SG> -Steve

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>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: [hidden email] [mailto:[hidden email]]On
>> Behalf Of Mikhail Burtsev
>> Sent: Thursday, May 22, 2003 4:51 PM
>> To: [hidden email]
>> Subject: [FRIAM] FRIAMer! I need your help.
>>
>>
>> ***  May 23 meeting to be at Jane's Cafe  ***
>> ***  map at http://www.redfish.com/friam  ***
>>
>>
>>
>> Here is my story.
>>
>> I  have prepared paper for the European Conference on ALife. The paper
>> was  accepted  but  - as you can see below referees were not exited by
>> quality of my English.
>>
>> "There are many grammatical errors, the paper should be proofread by a
>> native speaker of English."
>> "This paper has some serious problems with written English."
>> "The  English  is  grammatically  weak.  It  should  be  reviewed  and
>> corrected by a native speaker."
>>
>> Unfortunately  it  is  not  so  easy for me to find "native speaker of
>> English"  who  could check my paper here in Moscow. So I have to ask -
>> "Can   you  help  me  out  with  my  English  homework?"  (cited  from
>> dictionary :).
>>
>> If somebody will decide to help, the paper could be found here -
>> http://www.keldysh.ru/pages/mrbur-web/bur.zip  (516 KB)
>>
>> Before hand thanks for any help,
>> m.
>>